Band 7 IELTS Model Essay - IELTS Writing Lesson

source: Oxford Online English      2017年12月12日
In this video lesson, you can see a model band 7.0 IELTS essay. You'll see what the student does well and where the essay could be improved. Hope this helps you understand more about writing a band 7 IELTS essay. See the full version: https://www.oxfordonlineenglish.com/m... .

This lesson will help you:
- Learn about the useful ways to read and understand an IELTS Writing question.
- Understand what the essay does well in Task Achievement.
- See what the essay does well in Coherence & Cohesion.
- Learn about helpful types of vocabulary to use.
- See what kinds of grammar receive a Band 7 score.
- Understand how to build a good introduction in the IELTS essay.
- See examples of good ways to build paragraphs in the IELTS essay.

IELTS Essay Question:
Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
IELTS Writing Task 2 Scoring: https://takeielts.britishcouncil.org/...